Nik, words with a powerful message to someone who you loved and then there is a breakup. Nice to see you are moving on and can say these things to him. Well done.

This is the attitude that I like to see. In the end, to know that you wanting someone doesn't mean NEEDING them is a true sign of cleverness and wisdom.
As long as you have yourself, then you're fine. I absolutely loved this write because it goes line in line with my own way of thinking.
You wrote so eloquently, and with every verse I saw a stronger you.
A 5 for me Nik. And an easy one at that. Walah.

Very well written from ones true emotions. 5/5 good read

'One move to the left and we're on the highest high'
^I'm not sure if it sounded awkward to anyone else but highest high sounded slightly odd.

' won't sugarcoat this, I won't you to know what I mean.'
^Second won't should be want

I really loved this poem for the fact the emotion in it was easy to be felt. Theres many emotions running through your words, you can see that lingering hurt but more than anything the optimism shines through and speaks your message that you have moved on and don't want this person back in your life. Sometimes moving on is exactly what we need to be rewarded with the peace in our heart. I'm glad to read a poem like this, it was a wonderful write.

Loved it

Nik
It is hard to let go of someone we love. You did great with this piece.

My wounds are now small openings in my past
But the stronger I become, the less I want you back.
The words you whispered to me have melted away
Along with the "Together Forevers" that never stayed.
What doesn't make sense most likely hurts the most.
I'm done with being your hang over drug addicted overdose.

I love this stanza, How you decide you are done with the games and the words that meant nothing.
Great job!
~hugs~
Cindy

"My wounds are now small openings in my past
But the stronger I become, the less I want you back.
The words you whispered to me have melted away
Along with the "Together Forevers" that never stayed.
What doesn't make sense most likely hurts the most.
I'm done with being your hang over drug addicted overdose"

you are an amazing writer.
your one of my new fav's cant wait to read more of your stuff.

5.5

Wow, Wow, Wow. I totally dug this poem.

the whole thing was great!!

My favorite two lines,

I never wanted forever, I wanted day to day

and

Hell and heaven can never blend, we can never be friends.

A wonderful poem.

I hope we can keep swapping poem reads.
Ill come back for more of yours.

do I sense a new favorite Arther in my account...hmmmm....perhaps

thx for a great read.

Randy

I enjoyed reading your poem