Hey mami :) You already know you one of my favorites, so I dont have to go into detail why this was an amazing write. But the flow and rhyme were perfect in this poem. Also:
"The feel of your mouth against my neck,
sending shivers down my spine.
The taste of your kiss
like the headiest wine."
^^the imagery in this stanza was on point. your usage of adjectives stood out most to me.
Overall, great poem. You know I have to give you a 5/5 for this one boo =]
I love your descriptions!
'The taste of your kiss
like the headiest wine.'
Just through this simple sentence is enough for me to feel the kiss, jsut by envisaging the wine.
And I exceptionally loves this line:
of a love that transcends.