Comments : Winter Wonderland

  • 9 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Winter Wonderland, beautiful title.
    Winter is the best time for me in year and i really loved the way u justified the title.
    Usage of strong words really added more beauty to the winter.
    'Howling north winds dancing', loved this starting and really liked 'Whistling through naked trees', awesome lines taking the whole piece to next level.

    awesome poem yaar

    all the best and take care

  • 9 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    This is excellent Cindy... I could just picture the scene you have created with your words... A Winter Wonderland... its fantastic! ) lol. Loved it very much. Awesome..:)

  • 9 years ago

    by Sylvia

    As bad as these conditions can be, they do make a beautiful winter wonderland. Well done.

  • 9 years ago

    by Poetess

    Ahh this makes me anxious for the snow to come! just a few days ago it was 63 degrees. december and still no sign of snow here. the only think i don't like is the shoveling! lol
    anyway this poem was beautiful, Cindy. perfect image painted for the readers.

    take care,
    Liz

  • 9 years ago

    by Corinne

    I could feel the coldness whipping around and through me with this poem, Cindy. Very well done, madame :-)

  • 9 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    It is definatly a winter wonderland right now lol. I loved your imagery Cindy, very beautifully written. Awesome job!! (:

  • 9 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Nice imagery but wording could have been a little bit beter.

  • 9 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow... this is such a beautiful poem about winter! I love it! Great job!

  • 9 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Beautiful and descriptive...perfectly describes OH in December!

  • 9 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    This poem brought home memories of my childhood and days when the snow told us Christmas was close. An excellently written descriptive poem how I miss those days now I live in the sun of Thailand. Though those storms I do not miss. 5/5 Ray S

  • 9 years ago

    by Lu

    Wonderfully penned Cindy. Knowing how much you love winter and how you love to watch the snowing dancing outside your window ...I can totally see where the inspiration came from.

    You have created amazing imagery!

    "Frigid sparkling webs of lace"

    "Icicle prisms twinkle"
    ^^^
    Two of my favorite lines !!!!!

    Excellent read

    Luanne

  • 9 years ago

    by Lu

    Sorry I would of loved to nominated this piece but unfortunately it says all my voted have been used :(
    I'll have to wait until tomorrow or hopefully see it upon the front pages tomorrow :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    One of your best! Great flow, word choice and picture painting imagery! Excellent job!

  • 9 years ago

    by anand singh

    A beautiful description of nature's beauty.An enjoyable read.
    Paul...

  • 9 years ago

    by Malboros pipe

    I loved this poem. The vocab really intensifies the power of this small yet so fairytale like poem.
    Short sentences to give off that the poet what freezing cold while writing it.

    I loved it