I love this. So many people on here talk about how they feel about someone but you took a new direction and talked about what it feels like when you kiss! Great work! I liked the rhyme and flow! 5/5!!!

Very passionate... filled me with such yearning... it really brought out the emotions... i miss her so much now... lol. thanks for sharing.

I got chills while reading this poem. That NEVER happens to me. VERY well done. I cant wait tell I kiss my girl again!!

of mine, read Matter and Gravity