Comments : Birdie Shie & Birdie Hee

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Another sad poem that seems to be about a loved one that leaves and doesn't return. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Raj
    what a sad haunting write. The beauty of a true love ends with the death of the one true love. Then you die from a broken heart :(
    Great job!
    Love Cindy