Comments : Lazy Gray Days (Haikus)

  • 10 years ago

    by KJ

    Very interesting. It was quite short I must say. But the imagery was definately there. I just think you could have done much better with the length so it could have some sort of flow.

    --Sleep jails the timid--
    ^^my favorite line

    Overall, good write. But it could be better. So I gave it a 4/5.