Comments : This Ain't No Fairy Tale

  • 14 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Cool! very nice poem... it does tell people that appearences may fool you, when the original version of the fairytale was written I guess girls were as sweet and innocent as they seemed, but these days they are feirce... which is why your poem suits our reality a lot and also sends a message to all girls out there that they don't have to be tough looking to be tough... great work!

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I love how well written this was. The imagery was flawless and really made this a creative piece for me. I loved how well it flowed and how amazing the diction was. One of your best I'd have to say, very strong poem. Nice work :) Nik