Goodness gracious, I loved this!!...Your first stanza is superb! Very descriptive. My mind was totally picturing everything you were describing. What I love about a poem is opening with an interesting line or stanza and ending with one. It was awesome, you did just that!
5/5 for sure :)
Chels

Loved the title Jenn!

I read this piece so many times I think I now know it off by heart.
The imagery you created is ... AMAZING!

Wow, what a wild imagination you have here. Your words depicts the picture beautifully. The first stanza just leaves me want to read more. It's a very depressing event that happen here, but no doubt you have done an excellent job for writing this. It's a poem thats worth reading more than once.

Keep it up