I can understand why a person would call this rubbish as it is a very personal and believe it or not poems of this kind have to be a bit introvert as they make a lot of the not so lucky people feel uncomfortable, perhaps even a bit jealous that you can tell very publicly the way you feel with no blows held back. That is why I gave you a 5/5 as the poem is not exceptional though I do believe its excellence is in its sincerity as I to am blessed with the same feeling for my soul mate and wife. Excellent keep expressing your love this way and thanks for sharing it with us, Ray S.