Wow, I love this, John....I can almost see it in front of me. You kept it very poetic and that is a very big plus, to read something this beautiful about an act that really should be magical, and not cheap and vulgar, like sometimes it is presented.

This blindfold has heightened
My senses, my pleasure,
Your tongue slides over my skin
Seeking out new treasures.

^^
This drew me in right away, I have someone too that I would love to try this with, lol!

Beautiful work, John:)

Have a Merry Christmas and greetings to your lady:)

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid

Excellent poem, so sensual, got me tingling reading it, ;o) 5/5

Awww I love this poem its so sweet.... <3

Wow, what a sensual piece this is and what a beautiful flow. I love the opening stanza, definately my favorite. Nice writing ;o)