Comments : Your Mermaid Song

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Nature woven into words of love. Has a calming effect to your words. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    BEAUTIFUL!... Nice to have you writing again Randy... :) And this was well worth the wait. Your words create beautiful images, and speak of love so beautifully. Loved this piece by you.

    Write us some more!! :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I agree this poem has quite the calming tone to it, it flows with ease & is very beautiful. You did well, great job.

  • 14 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Thank you for your kind comments! Glad you liked it.