Comments : What Could Be In Summer

  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    This sounds delightful :) i loved the imagery!! great job! please read my "change" poem??

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Remove 'in' after joyfully in the first line, I think you can do without it.

    This was such a soothing write... full of nature & beautiful images.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Lovely... very beautiful imagery...
    your words made me feel like bask in the warm summer morning...

    Blue jays and red robins sing a duet
    tapping anxiously outside my window
    I dwell endlessly in serene reveries
    where marigolds paint perfect beauty
    ^^ loved the imagery here ... the glory of summer is so beautifully depicted... marigold and red robins made it even more lively ...

    wonderful write :)