Great job on the form Myryn. It is so wonderful to see you guys branching out and trying new things.

A place my consort oft concealed
shadowy world alas revealed
yet the one place he never hides
each mirth and grief of drifting clouds
^^^
Love the line you used for a refrain!
And loved this last stanza, especially "shadowy world alas revealed"

Great job hun !!!!!

Wonderful job done on the quatern
very powerful and deep write... beautifully worded...

*claps* I loved this. I'm not sure if you know the song "My Immortal" By Evanscence but this piece has the same powerful words and sadness as that song. This was very well done hun and I loved loved readning it. You always amaze me :) *hugs* Nik