Comments : Come Crashing Down

  • 10 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    A unique way of using comets as the base of your poem. I really liked it though, a interesting metaphor & a job well done on your challenge.

  • 10 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Reminds me of the thought some people have that the grass is always greener on the other side. In this case, you have done just the opposite, that you are happy with the person you love and don't have to wonder about the other side. Well done.

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Beautiful poem NIk
    You have made the reader feel your emotion. Great imagery and word choices.
    Excellent!
    ~hugs~
    Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Faithless

    Nicely written. First off, I would like to say that, I find the idea very original and not cliche at all. I like the simplicity of this poem, just the both of you loving each other for who you are and not hope for any kind of fairytales like others do. The was constructed well into the poem. I love the way you end it, just by asking one simple request.

    Excellent Job

    Wish you all the best for the contest;)

  • 10 years ago

    by Corinne

    Ah, you had to talk about comets, but this is clearly not about them :-) Excellent piece, Lady Nik

  • 10 years ago

    by Exostosis

    Very well written, i really dont have the words to uplift the beauty of this poem.
    bravo ^^,

  • 10 years ago

    by ~ღ~ jeSSica ~ღ~

    Excellent poem!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I'm glad you've realized you don't need somebody who is absolutely perfect in order to love them and be happy. I believe most people throw away their happiness because they think there is so much better out their for them. Thats not always the case... Great job as always very good imagery and flow 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Kimberley

    "I've had my fair share of
    rainbows with colors galore
    so many broken pots of
    gold, I don't want anymore.
    Enough stars in my closet
    to keep it lit for years.
    Done too much planet surfing
    I'm better off here"

    Okay I've got to say this is one of the BEST stanzas in poetry that I have ever laid my eyes on. I just... I mean wow. It's so descriptive and appealing. I mean I can really picture it and it's such a nice thing to picture. A great love poem if you ask me.

    overall I loved the entire thing but that one stanza just really did it for me. :) 5/5!