Reminds me of the thought some people have that the grass is always greener on the other side. In this case, you have done just the opposite, that you are happy with the person you love and don't have to wonder about the other side. Well done.
Nicely written. First off, I would like to say that, I find the idea very original and not cliche at all. I like the simplicity of this poem, just the both of you loving each other for who you are and not hope for any kind of fairytales like others do. The was constructed well into the poem. I love the way you end it, just by asking one simple request.
I'm glad you've realized you don't need somebody who is absolutely perfect in order to love them and be happy. I believe most people throw away their happiness because they think there is so much better out their for them. Thats not always the case... Great job as always very good imagery and flow 5/5
9 years ago
"I've had my fair share of
rainbows with colors galore
so many broken pots of
gold, I don't want anymore.
Enough stars in my closet
to keep it lit for years.
Done too much planet surfing
I'm better off here"
Okay I've got to say this is one of the BEST stanzas in poetry that I have ever laid my eyes on. I just... I mean wow. It's so descriptive and appealing. I mean I can really picture it and it's such a nice thing to picture. A great love poem if you ask me.
overall I loved the entire thing but that one stanza just really did it for me. :) 5/5!