Comments : Indescribable

  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    "There's a hole in my hearts pathway that I need someone to repave" my favorite line. bottom line. :)

  • 14 years ago

    by KJ

    First off, your I have to agree with Autumn Breeze on that the title of this poem was perfect. What I really loved most about this write is that you didn't use the standard four line stanza throughout; but instead added two-liners. You also used a lot of questions which made me feel as if I as the reader was actually going through the motions of love. Makes me wonder eh.
    Overall, beautifully written. This most definately deserves a 5/5.