Great write! You're imagery was spectacular and the rhythm flowed beautiful from start to finish.

I really liked this line:

"Gravity pulls and the earth will fall
While the bright sun rises for us all"

the imagery pulls you in.

Great write!

That is such a good poem, by the way keep up this good work and plus its true wot you say 5/5

This is my favorite line: "However long the night, the dawn will break
No matter how many shadows demons make"
it's so completely true! this was beautiful! keep it up! would you mind reading my "images" poem? i just love the feedback you give me! :)

Short and too the point, with again the colorful vocab. Nice piece. 5/5

very uplifting