Wonderful job on the quatern Landy !

Love the line you used for your refrain.

Starved of love; you are obsession.
Slave of faith; hope's divination.
Packaged, bundled, carved by trouble;
searching for your absent double.
^^^
Wonderful opening stanza. Pulled me right into the piece ... wanting to read more.

Such a unique - eye catching title too.

Great read!

First off, I gotta say your vocab was so hard for me lol.
I really really enjoyed this poem, I actually read it several times before commenting, and before you even posted it
I love love love your repetitive line, it was so catchy when I first read it, I don't know why didn't you entitle it "Starved of love; you are obsession.", it would've been great as well.
I still really like this one though :)

Packaged, bundled, carved by trouble;
searching for your absent double.
^Love those line a lot!

The best thing about this poem is its rhyme, I could find it flawless; it went smooth and flowed beautifully!
There's nothing else to be said except for this poem is a masterpiece :)

Amazing work babe
Write on~