My only problem or issue with the poem was the usage of automatically -- I feel there is something better out there. Otherwise beautiful as can be and has me yearning to be close to someone special.

This was such a lovely piece. I'm not a big fan of love poems or even writing them but I felt this was very well done. I loved the diction and how you didn't let the words you used overpower the emotions of the piece. I like the length as well. Not too long and detailed but not too short to where I have to paint my own pictures. This was very beautiful and not a surprise from someone as talented as yourself. Very nice poem dear :) Nik