Sylvia
Awesome job on the Musette form challenge.
Very sad piece. Always hard to have to say good-bye :(
Love Cindy

I'm with Gabe, I'm gonna have to give this a try. Nice work :) Nik

This was very good. just a few words can explode with meaning. This poem did just that. Very sad write...but happens everyday unfortunately. :[ Wonderfully done.

Very touching write Sylvia... beautifully penned Musette :)

So many fear death..while they should not!

This poem looks very simple, until you really start to read what you are saying...I think it is absolutely wonderful what you say in the second and third stanza, no regrets for the years spent together and to allow the other to leave in peace....a splendid, peaceful poem, Silvia.

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid

A very sad piece that have such realistic depth.Whether it's to a death or losing a friendship, goodbye always seem to be hard for us to say.
Wonderfully penned.
Paul...

A wonderful write... and a great job on the challenge Sylvia. Brilliant.