^ I also thought that line was excellent^... Powerful write 15/5

Wow, you have been writing! i havent had much inspiration lately.. mostly been just chillin with my friends haha smokin and shit.. but what ever i been lookin at some of these and they're really good! 5/5

You ave a beautifull flow off words .. Simple addored this one off my favourites ...
Well done strong powerfull words

Take care
Donna xx