Nitin
What a great job on the club challenge. You have penned a great Musette. I love the emotion you have captured in this. So sad. It is really hard to get so much in so few words. You did a fantatstic jjob!
Love Cindy

Awesome... you have done a great job with this form Nitin, and expressed the desire for freedom so well. Loved the opening stanza especially...

"Someone
Inside me breathes
To run"

Fantastic.

Nice job Nitin. I think we all have that someone inside that wants to run free.

I think you meant to say "hopeful wonder" -- other than that very nicely done, each Musette I read is wonderful & accomplishes the challenge. Such few words but have a lot of meaning packed within them. Nicely done .

What a powerful punch of feeling in sucha short form.

Great job with the way it makes the reader feel....the imagery it creates.

Well done!

You have shown time and time again that your tallent for writing is up there with the best.I do not know this form of writing but like Cindy's musette, you've done a wonderful job with it.The depth of the meaning of these words are quite clear.
Keep up the great work my friend.An enjoyable read.
Paul...