"If I told you that I wake up
at four AM just to look at
your photos to keep my
dreams real...would you
laugh at me and remind
me that I have insomnia?"

i absolutely love that first stanza. it's so strong and powerful. i also really like how you had written this poem by continuing each idea onto the next line (if i remember my english class well enough, it's called enjambment :P) because it puts much more emphasis on certain words.

beautifully written. :)
5/5

Well let me first say this poem should not be under Misc....i can't really put my finger on it, I don't know here it should be....at first it seemed a little sad, then a little hopeful..

Over all, I really actually enjoyed this poem. I don't read non rhyming things often, but I can honestly say I thoroughly enjoyed this. I especially liked your wording :)

Chelsey

Beautifully written hun , the 1st stanza totally moved me.