Comments : The daydreams

  • 14 years ago

    by XxXMissSweetPeaXxX

    Awww thats soo sweet..lol
    i like that its cute. but also awesome.

  • 13 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A stunning write...! Lol. I came back to check out your poems as its been a long time since ive read/commented and Im not disappointed :) Love your writing/poems which are so tenderly written. Very well done!

    A Beautiful poem, so wonderfully expressed.

  • 13 years ago

    by M I L L Y

    Now this is my type of poems =]
    this happens to me all the time! damn

  • 13 years ago

    by chind

    "I'm laying here
    awake in my room
    my eyes aren't shut
    yet I'm dreaming of you"
    - that was a lovely beginning, i loved it!

    im pretty sure we can all relate to this poem in some way ... i know i can, which is what makes it that much better! nice work :) i liked this a lot!

  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany Klein

    Aww, wow. this is really good!

    I like it alot and the words seem to draw you to that moment and make you feel what was felt!

    Great job! ^_^ 5/5