I like the poem but the title especially, its almost like everyone retraces steps they've taken in their lives to find out how they got where they are today. Good job 5/5

Wow. .. Wow. Kalli that is the best poem i have ever read of yours and i still have 2 more new ones to go! You're gettin superb and your own neat style. I'm really serious when i say that that was amazing. i hope things start lookin better for ya.

I didnt like this one as the other two as much, but good nonetheless, perhaps you should clean it up and move things around to make it all a little easier to read