This is so powerful and good. You express a lot of depth and feeling.

Amazing poem

will done on this one :)

~gIrL~

Aww; such a romantic write Karl! The imagery is what I loved most. It was like reading a short book really. I have read many of your poems, and they all seem to be full of emotion and truth (and voice). This is no exception. Also, you keep your choice of vocabulary very simple; which is something that I can really admire. Your works say so much.
Overall, I can honestly say that I enjoyed reading this wonderful piece. Perfectly written. 5/5.

-KJ

This was so unbelieveably cute~ (Sorry if you don't like being compared to a Teddy Bear, but it's true.)

"Romeo and Juliet never had a shot to compete,
They never had a prayer put against us, the elite."
^ This play is known worldwide. In english, in french, german, chinese, in the young and the old. So right off the bat it was easy to understand. Everyone knows about the undying love they have for each other, the famous tragedy of Romeo and Juliet. Very cute comparisson, there's definitely a LOT of love there.

"I walked over and took your adorable little hand in mine,
You looked up an smiled, said "excuse me do you mind?"
To be honest I never dreamed I had much of a chance,
Replied with a grin "I don't mind, would you care to dance?"
^ Isn't that just something right out of a story book? Most Love poems come off cliche, but right here you added in something special, a little bit of personality. Something to make this yours.

You have a great talent for writing, and I enjoyed reading this very much. ^-^ 5/5 Well deserved. Well earned. It was so beautiful~ -Teenage Girl Moment- Keep on Writing! x)