Landy, you have taken this poem to an all new heights. I love how you express the ideal picture perfect marriage that you have.The choice of words that you used really brought your dream to live.I'm also happy that you wrote this poem about marriage, without having the marriage inside. It's good that you're expressing it in an alternate way. Truly indeed this poem fits well with the quote from John Lennon. Well like they always say, it takes two hands to clap;) Excellent Job.

I mean honestly.... I am speechless...I didn't know this form at all, but putting that aside if I just read this as a poem (which I did because I didnt know the rhyme scheme or syllable count) I absolutely loved it!. You have a gift :)