Comments : Conquering The Storms

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    MaryAnne,

    You have me flabbergasted..I am speechless, really...

    How come you write so well at such a young age? I read poems by other people that are approxiamately your age and a lot of them are about blue eyes and ditto skies, lol. You have such an eloquent way of expressing yourself, and this poem, inspired by a painting, is so unique and creative, hats off for you, sweetheart!

    I begin to trust vexed tears
    swimming in a tinted chasm
    whom am I wholly befriending?
    perhaps a reflection of myself

    ^^
    This was stunning, because of the maturaty it shows in your way of thinking.

    A beautiful, beautiful poem....

    Rock on, lil missy!

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid