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by shobhana kumar
you are an extremely talented writer and it shows in this verse.
I especially like the line Blind beliefs wait by the shore"
by Courageous Dreamer
Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Fate is definatly an interesting topic & one that is interesting to hear the thoughts of others on. I loved the ending, how fate is written in ink and can't be altered. Nicely done.
by Lady Nik
I liked this piece a lot dear :) Very well done. Shobhana is write, you're a very talented write. Loved this :) Nik
by Ingrid de Klerck
The Lira is a short and lovely format and I know from experience it's difficult to make a short poem like this interesting to read.
You succeeded however and gave the reader al lot to ponder upon.
I too believe that the course of our life is already known and we get to fill in the little details, the ones that make us unique.
by Tom Swart
Very nice and very short - even better. I think this work of your is very well penned and the words chosen seem to fit perfectly! Bravo!
Wonderful job on the Lira Meena
I really love this form. It allows so much to be said in so few lines.