Beautifully written!! I love the emotion and how great you were able to draw a perfect picture. As i was reading this i was able to see everything as you described it!! You have amazing talent!! 5/5!!!

It feels like pain & having a hard time trying to show the person that you really love them. Good job.

Crazy how when we're together the hours pass like minutes, but when we're apart, a minute lasts a lifetime.

^^ I loved this line!! Mostly because it described how I feel about my boyfriend..Time goes by to quickly when we're together it's so sad....It's a wonderful feeling, but at the same time a big disappointment when the night is over.
Your fiance is one lucky lady, your poetry for her is outstanding!
Love it!

Crazy how when we're together the hours pass like minutes, but when we're apart, a minute lasts a lifetime.

^^ I loved this line!! Mostly because it described how I feel about my boyfriend..Time goes by to quickly when we're together it's so sad....It's a wonderful feeling, but at the same time a big disappointment when the night is over.
Your fiance is one lucky lady, your poetry for her is outstanding!
Love it!