A rambling but wonderful love poem, filled with insecurity as if the love was going in one direction and you feel as if you are being used. Yet I would if I had been who you wrote the poem for or to have taken a deep breath and felt my heart beat faster and with meaning.

But I promised you today that I would love you forever
Until the light from the land disappears into eternity
Until time slips and falls through the broken ice and
Freezes and slowly passes away.
I promised you
Today I would not love another the way I love you
With such intensity that it over powers me into a dance
Of joy and makes my heart leap out of my chest.

Love is a wondrous thing that can pull emotions onto a page from a poets pen and bring tears to the eyes of both the reader and the writer.
I wish someone had written the words above for me.
Ray S Excellent 5/5