Very nice! The expression of true love..liked it..

Interesting and different. It makes a good comparison. Nicely worded.

gave it a 5/5

This piece has been penned to perfection. It is absolutely amazing. Great job with the creativity. It is so short and so simple, yet it is remarkbale. Excellent job

Wow! What a beatiful penned poem
I loved it

Great poem 5/5 x