Comments : Breaking Free

  • 14 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Our "meant to be"
    Was meant to end

    ^^ I really loved those lines, they really captivated my attention! The whole poem captivated my poem but specifically those two! I loved it and thought this was a great write!

  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    I also loved those lines. "Our "meant to be"
    Was meant to end."
    it's so heartbreaking and beautiful :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Stephanie Michelle

    Great flow and emotion! As mentioned before, the lines
    "our meant to be
    was meant to end"
    are beautiful and perfect for the piece.

    good write!