Very true!

Nice poem. (:

I love ur poem is very true u should write more cuz der very good!!5/5

Good work :) hope we see more from ya.

Wow!! 5/5

Wow!! reminds me of the time i learned Santa claus wasn't, cupid was flowers, and learned hearts are shaped like arrows with bosoms. Reality and knowledge sure is painful. 5/5

Spectacular write 5/5

This was a really good poem, keep it up babe :) Nik

Soooooo True
I'm ur sisters GF btw.. lol

So true, we all couldnt wait to grow up. but now that were grown up we all prolly want to be a little kid again with no worries.
excellent poem. 5/5

This is some serious shit. good poem