Comments : Love is...

  • 14 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Sarah,
    I really quite enjoyed this poem!! A few lines were humorous, which I enjoy getting a laugh every now and then.

    When happiness springs like a fountain
    ^^ I thought that was a great simile! "Springs" was a good verb to use, I really loved that line, and the ending sentence that followed.
    Your poem was very cute and well written I loved it!