Very sad piece hun :( I can tell it's personal which makes it so well written. Nice work. Nik

This almost has a musical quality to it, could be a good song.

"You slipped from my heart and left me so emptied."

I think you could change this to empty and it reads just fine and I think accomplishes the rhyme you were going for or so it seemed.

"Never finding the passion you so desperately hunted."

Again if you were actually going for rhyme, I think you could use "daunted" in some way, for example:

Never finding the passion so desperately daunted.

Overall though I enjoyed this and the musical tone it had, a nice read, good work.

Beautiful Chaos has some good suggestions, but they aren't nessesarily needed.

i liked it. the feelings were there. but honestly, if not for you telling me about this about your friend that died, it would have been hard for me to make that connection.

but all of your rhymes sounded good together. thanks for sharing, and im sorry about your friend. :(

Ok ur going on my favs. And so is this poem.
Look, ive been through something similar (that is, if im getting the message right) and i know its difficult and not something easily forgotten.

I never stopped while reading this. I read it in one breath and that means that the flow was PERFECT. Im jealous. 5/5