Okay. This was small, so the comment won't be massive, like usual.

I LOVED the idea of this poem. I liked the fact that it was a prose and not a nasty, forced rhyming piece I saw all too much.

The ONLY problem I had with this poem was the fact that it was cut so short; I felt you didn't complete it - there could have been more. You should always remember, when writing, to 'end with a catchy phrase' that captures the whole poem in a sentence or paragraph, to sum it up.

However, besides the ending, I really liked it.
Congrats, that's hard to do. :]

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

It is right as soldiers we do not decide wether we kill or not because it is our job. WE are killing machines, trained to take away life.