Comments : Too Late for Us

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww... I liked this poem... I like how your writing is simple, but effective with portraying your emotions. I like the mention of sweet small things, such as that the cologne faded from his jacket. All very relatable..

    I loved this stanza:
    "All the moments of our old reality,
    Are now becoming memories of the past.
    If only we could go back to those days,
    Time for us flew by way too fast."

    Well done :)