Awwww :( This is horrible!! I mean, the poem is amazing, very very good. Just that you still feel all of this is so sad. You are really good at expressing emotions though. It really hurt me to read this, because I have been going through the same thing. I just wish you were all better. This piece is so powerful, because your word choice was perfect, and the rhyme scheme was excellent. Everything just worked so well together, and I think you told the story very well. You're a great writer, and I hope you keep writing. I would love to read more from you hun :) Take care, xxx Katie

ps I gave it a 5 hehe:P

This is very sad and yet so true i am sry u feel this way and u know i am here for u sry i have not been on much but i am here i will pray for this to end soon for u kid great poem and great expression 5/5

Tammi

Oh wow. Once again you know why I can relate to this. Just hold on. Be brave and keep your head up because those people just want to see you fall. I'm here whenever you need someone. This was hurtful. Love you xx