Ahh, what a beauty this poem is..MaryAnne you are growing up so fast, sweetheart..there is so much change in your language. I am deeply moved by your words and the pureness that speaks from them.

Nature brings her blessings wrapped in august rush
a slow but musical zephyr who teaches exploration,

I offer you everything as I share room in my heart.

^^^
Perfect wording, so very moving.

I can no longer keep up with your pace, sweetheart, but the poems I manage to read are beyond perfection:)

God bless you dear girl,

5/5 Ingrid

Yet in the real world? A naive poem beautifully written, hope your life keeps your head in the clouds and you never have to face the true disappointments that face people daily. I to hold a place in my heart for your untouched life and unbesmirched optimism, Keep on dreaming and praying and stay young. Life is really a cheap commodity in today's world as we worship money more than it and love is blown away through the lack of it. 5/5 Ray S