Comments : First Date

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah

    w0w... nice poem

  • 19 years ago

    by Amy

    That was a wonderfully written poem! It was so sad...I was crying by the end. Wonderful job!
    Luv,
    Amy

  • 19 years ago

    by Kristina K

    Wow Amy. Great poem, although it was very sad. Very good use of words. Thanks for sharing your wonderful work. Take care!
    Kristina

  • 19 years ago

    by MeL JoY

    again amazing!

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessica

    This is such a sad story! Did your crush ever find out that you had been raped! I'm so sry this hpnd 2 u! God Bless, Jezzika

  • 18 years ago

    by *secrets*

    This poem is PURE CRAP

  • 18 years ago

    by *secrets*

    THIS POEM IS PURE CRAP!!! FIRST OF ALL BECAUSE THE FIRST HALF UP TILL: ''Then right on time
    there was a knock at the door
    he looked even cuter
    then he had before'' IS ALL FORGERY!!!! I READ IT ON ANOTHER POEM!! CHEAT- LIAR- USER- COPIER- ILL BET ITS NOT EVEN TRUE U STUFFED UP GIRL THAT GOES AROUND AND CORRECTS OTHER PEOPLES WRITING! POEMS DONT NEED TO BE CRITIZIZED- THEY ARE WHAT PEOPLE FEEL!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sammie

    I really liked your poem...it was really good...i was almost in tears when i was done...i loved it...---sam

  • 16 years ago

    by Hermosa

    It was a really good poem hopefully it isnt true because it is horrible to go through those things

  • 16 years ago

    by Emotiionsz

    This poem is very touching

  • 15 years ago

    by Kayla

    That is sad and very good..