Comments : Do You Care?

  • 14 years ago

    by Fatal Syndrome

    Well written, i can feel your pain o: i can tell by the way you wrote this, i were literally expressing what you feel.. good job :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Cale

    I really enjoyed this poem!! The flow was great. And the theme is a common one that I think lots of people deal with and you were able to express it in an amazing way!!! Great work! 5/5