Hi Moucha Charbel:)

How is life treating you, hun?

This poem is bitter and real to life, sad to say many relationships end like that and leave you with nothing but useless memories and hope for a day that will never come.

There are a few grammar errors in it, but that is ok, the reader can see very clearly waht you are meaning to say.

Life is a b**ch and the leg part..yeah..so right, so right;)

Don't let it get to you, make a future for yourself and then the right girl will come one day, out of the blue.

God bless and good luck,

5/5 Ingrid

Oh, oh, oh it's a long time i have not red any of your poems. I am glad that i was going through my fav. list and came upon you. I believed that when a relationship ends, a part of you escape and it's like even when you tried to turn another page, it seems like the wind blows and immediately that page return to the surface. Good to read your words, take care, kel.

Painful , yet amazing ...
Great job on this one

I like it... so true...