Strategically Heartbreaking.
No-one deserves that . . .

Perfect. As-per-usual.
xx

Wow the rythm does not exactly flow, but hey, with lyrics like that who needs rythm.

Oh shit. tears are coming :( good write. wow im totally shocked. it was great :) well done xx

Fantastic; I loved it.
It reminded me of myself in a weird way. I know people always say they can relate, to everything and everyone. But somehow reading this, the image of me standing atop my roof with a crowd of people standing below slipped into my mind.
You never cease to amaze me, well done :)

You are amazing Renee =] We havnt spoken in a long time i dont think.. im jordan hhaa i know you'll remember x Reply when your ready so we can chat x loveyouu, P.s} Wow that poems heartbeaking, you are so talented at poetry x

Amazing, but sad =] xxx loveyouu renee