A really great poem, just a few words that you missed a leter or two but all in all its still eally good.
This was a nice break from the normal configuration of poems, 4 lines= one stanza etc.
But as a suggestion try to clear up the flow. The beginning is great but then it kinda threw me off when you said, "This feeling I feel is so surreal" that can be trimmed down
But again its just a suggestion, its ur poem :) 5/5