It's great, you're talented and you know it.

Wow nice write, keep up the good work

Dang! This poem is amazing!!! The emotion is strong, and so is the word choice. In fact this poem literally left me speechless at first. It is so creative and powerful, and definatly dark. The word choice is... is I don't know a suitable word for it... the flow is excellent, as is the length. I must say this piece feels like it is perfect. 5/5