Comments : If Loneliness Had a Sound...

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I enjoyed reading this. It is well written and does described loneliness and has given a voice to the feeling. The one thing I see is that if you remove the title, the reader has to decide what It is. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Your escalation is both logical and painful in its depiction. The true measure of a piece like this is that it vividly evokes bad memories of nights spent in teenage angst.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Strange that even though loneliness is silent it can speak more ... hurt more than any word could.
    wonderfully written...

  • 14 years ago

    by Nee

    There's something so very appealing in this piece. Loneliness, and sounds, two words that pretty much contradict each others meanings.
    Loved the simplicity, the descendant words; whisper, echo, screams, shouting. I really loved that :)
    Well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by Sourav

    Nice write indeed. And a great title!

  • 14 years ago

    by tainted melody

    I really like how even though it is short the storyline really feels finished and it was nicely developed. ^_^