The reasons people don't comment on poems like this is they need to be read again and again to get their gist. They then need more effort to think it out and arrange it in some type of order before you can get it flow in your head I am not a keen reader of blank nonrhythmic poetry or verse. Yet at the end of reading them though sometimes the outcome is one of marvel I think this is what I have found here. It was worth the effort to read another of your excellent poems. 5/5 Ray S

This is by far the best poem of yours that I have read. However, it did take me reading it twice before I completely got the point of it. Still, a very good poem written by a very good poet =-]