Comments : Thrilling

  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    I'm yours - an honest phrase to trust,
    Melting away the barriers placed,
    Obsession - the new form of lust,
    Tempting fear to turn into waste,

    when i read this stanza, i had a moment where you think you might have found something initially true to life. and for a second everything made sense.

    then i read you last stanza, and it threw me for a loop. i really liked the way you ended it. it seemed to work really well with the title. but its meaning is a bit cryptic to me.