Comments : Todays importance

  • 10 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I really liked this poem, just talking about the days activities, but I really loved it!! Good write!!!! love ya.

  • 9 years ago

    by Kuro

    You have the tendency to make comparisons of your feelings to nature. i think your personality could possibly be coming out into your writing. keep up the good work.

    ~Kuro

  • 9 years ago

    by Dreaming out loud

    The poem shows you are gratful for the little things in life that not many are.
    A very nice write with a fine underlaying talent for poetry blooming

  • 9 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww.. wow! I loved this poem! So simple yet so powerful and well-written... I love the repetition of today's importance.. And I love how you write about simple events that occur on a daily basis, yet you show how they make today important... So beautiful! Great job!

  • 7 years ago

    by William Mae

    I love this poem, its the feelings and moments of now that makes life important. not yesterdays memories or tomorrows maybe's, but the moments of today. beautiful

  • 7 years ago

    by Chima

    Good piece though i saw where some fittings could do Like"when reading a novel at sunrise'' that phrase was nice but i think it would be better if you replaced the *SUNRISE WITH SUNSET* it would be a nice ending to a delightful show. thumbs up with natures work 4/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    That is good job really nice write about anybody lol

  • 7 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Another great write!
    Great poem Tainted Melody. I enjoyed reading this!

  • 6 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    ..and all things you mentioned are free of charge, as the best things in Life are!

    Well done, you write really well:)

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 6 years ago

    by Vic Johns

    Simple, yet deep & purposeful at the same time!