Aww.. wow! I loved this poem! So simple yet so powerful and well-written... I love the repetition of today's importance.. And I love how you write about simple events that occur on a daily basis, yet you show how they make today important... So beautiful! Great job!
Good piece though i saw where some fittings could do Like"when reading a novel at sunrise'' that phrase was nice but i think it would be better if you replaced the *SUNRISE WITH SUNSET* it would be a nice ending to a delightful show. thumbs up with natures work 4/5
7 years ago
by Midnight Sky
That is good job really nice write about anybody lol