I like it a lot! :-) I have two suggestions!

<I Gave you the best
Of the worst lies
Wrapped neatly
in the arms of the truth
Along with the most
Brutal honesty
yet you considered me
Hypocrite>

In this stanza, maybe use a lower case g in "gave"? And change "hypocrite" to "hypocritical".

<I gave you
The most innocent
Thoughts written
on a wall of a
dark emotions
Yet you say
there is no sincerity in my soul>

In this stanza, I suggest you change

"on a wall of a
dark emotions"

to

"on a wall of
dark emotions"

:-) all in all, I really liked it! :-) Good job!

I gave you
The fear within
my nightmares
Sprinkled with
the hope I found in my
most amazing dreams
Yet you say I'm hidden

*I loved this stanza :] It's very well written and says so much to me. I love how you explained everything and had so much details in each stanza. I could tell this was a personal piece with a lot of bulild up and surpessed emotions. I loved the flow of the piece and how everything came together at the end. A very lovely piece. One of your best I'd have to say. :] Nik*

This is full of powerful emotions! It just seems like you needed to release these feelings metaphorically.

Excellent. it feels like those words i cant get off my chest.

This is reallly good. :)

5/5 =]